For this post, I want you to read the following examples that are in red type. Then, I would like you to work on fixing any grammar issues that the passage might have. Write your final version in the blog post as: EXAMPLE #1, EXAMPLE #3, EXAMPLE #3.
EXAMPLE #1:
I remember the battle as if it was yesterday, the great snowball planned all perfectly: we the ducks attacked first, our mission was to make the farmers believe they had won by letting them go through our attack, but of course it didn't come to their head that there was a second attack waiting for them.
EXAMPLE #2:
Hard work is paying off in the farm and i'm very happy to be working for this hard worker family. Now that i have the time to think about the thing that happened, for me, the Battle of Cowshed was a battle full of emotions.
EXAMPLE #3:
During this battle there was a carousal, I was very scared and I started to kick everything that I saw, I kicked a boy in his head with my iron horseshoe, he got knocked out. Mr. Jones carried a gun, he killed a sheep that was on our side, and after the war we did a funeral in honor of the sheep.
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