Hello my name is Napoleon. I'm the actual líder of the Animal Farm. To get at my place as the leader we has to go over a lot of stuff. First we has the battle of Cowsheed, personally i was far from the battle watching how everybody killed each other. Meanwhile I planes my master plan to take over Snowball. When the fight finish I started to get more into power now that snowball was hurt.
Days later, I just felt disturbed by the presence of Snowball, he just did not support any of my though. I did not like that because he just disturbed me with so much negativity he did not understand what i did he was blind and did not understand. He was to different i just decided to knock-out snowball from power and stay as the ultimate leader and send him out. Snowball had planned a windmill that will make energy and make crops faster, its is a great idea but now his gone, i will take the credit for this and everybody will think i am better than snowball, this will make animal farm the most advance farm of all.
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Post #2
EXAMPLE #1:
I remember the battle as if it was yesterday; the great Snowball planned it perfectly. We, the ducks attacked first. Our mission was to make the farmers believe they had won, by letting them go through our attack. But of course, it didn't come to their heads that there was a second attack waiting for them.
EXAMPLE #2:
Hard work is paying off on the farm, I’m very happy to be working for this hard worker family. Now that I have the time to think about what happened; the Battle of Cowshed, was a battle full of emotions.
EXAMPLE #3:
During this battle there was a carousal, I was very scared and I started to kick everything that I saw. I kicked a boy in his head with my iron horseshoe, he got knocked out. Mr. Jones carried a gun and he killed a sheep that was on our side, after the war we did a funeral in honor of the sheep.
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POST #3
Animal farm was a place that look perfect, a well and organiced place need a líder. Animo Farm has to lider and Napoleón the final líder. Napoleón first cares about the people/animals, they were hall treated equal bug at the momento he noticies he could hace hall the power he gave it to himself. Napoleon started to be lime a farmer with his animales, witch was not fair for the other animales.
Animal farm was strong at the starting becaue they seré united bug if they beban to separate they seré note hable to stay strong. The ideas of equality seré never applied recaude dome animales has more benefits than others.Animals from the beggining seré treated diferente per example at the speech of the majo the pigs seré sat at the front because they seré sumarte.
Squealer is a carácter that hits hall the time in the back recaude there is allways a more importante carácter in front, bug whitout him anything would happend. He was the one that united every vado to listen to Napoleón. When every body doubt about Napoleón, Squealer chances the mind of every body.
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POST #3
Animal farm was a place that look perfect, a well and organiced place need a líder. Animo Farm has to lider and Napoleón the final líder. Napoleón first cares about the people/animals, they were hall treated equal bug at the momento he noticies he could hace hall the power he gave it to himself. Napoleon started to be lime a farmer with his animales, witch was not fair for the other animales.
Animal farm was strong at the starting becaue they seré united bug if they beban to separate they seré note hable to stay strong. The ideas of equality seré never applied recaude dome animales has more benefits than others.Animals from the beggining seré treated diferente per example at the speech of the majo the pigs seré sat at the front because they seré sumarte.
Squealer is a carácter that hits hall the time in the back recaude there is allways a more importante carácter in front, bug whitout him anything would happend. He was the one that united every vado to listen to Napoleón. When every body doubt about Napoleón, Squealer chances the mind of every body.
David,
ReplyDeleteI liked that you chose Napoleon to write your blog post about. I think the details that you used in your post allowed me to understand that you have a good, general understanding of his role in what is happening on Animal Farm. Please make sure to proof your blog post before publishing. Try having a classmate proof it for you, if you can. There were several spelling and grammatical areas for improvement that made it a little hard to read. Also, make sure to read the instructions carefully. There was a minimum of 3 paragraphs required. Overall, it is clear that you understand what is happening in the story up until now. Work on those items and your next post will be that much better!